Sunday, August 30, 2009

I'M An Alien Comments

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I'm an alien to myself,
Because, I often improvise my doings
I don't feel satisfied,
for whatever I have achieved
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Deependra Kumar Jha
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Kesav Easwaran 17 September 2009

good poem Deepen...you raise a very valid question in your write...thanks...10

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Bob Blackwell 12 September 2009

To overcome your worries, you first have to accept yourself as unique, a person like everyone following fashion or the racial norm. The people who really succeed in life are those that take the road less travelled, by this I mean we realise we are do not have to be the same. Our world is full of prejudice, but it can also be full of love as well, choose your friends carefully, be happy with yourself and you'll go far. Keep writing it is a joy unto itself.

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Marieta Maglas 08 September 2009

You are apparently an alien to yourself but really you are yourself, a person who needs to aspire to an ideal. Interesting abstract poem, very well written, thank you for sharing........10++++++++

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Jester's P 02 September 2009

I am an Alien is a paradox of acceptance and rejection. Acceptance because there are things in this world that we accept as common among our kin and folk but a feeling of rejection because its against our philosophy of life, just to be in and be part of the group. Rejection in the other hand because there are things in this world we reject, and most of the time these are activities/ practices of our own people that would cause us trouble. Anyhow…being an Alien because we challenge them is a membership to the righteous and holy people of God.

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 31 August 2009

Alien in terms of thought wouldn't be much of an alien though.Good writes Deependra.

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Hebert Logerie Sr. 30 August 2009

You are in command of your soul, your conscience... You are not an alien. Follow your inspirations, aspirations and dreams. Please don't give up.

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C. P. Sharma 30 August 2009

An urge to do something new and different is good at your age. Deliver the goods and people will follow you. It takes time, the people and the society don't change overnight. Excelsior. CP

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Obinna Eruchie 30 August 2009

Being an alien not only to yourself, but to others spells a certain kind of problem. An interesting piece.

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Ency Bearis 30 August 2009

a clever write but meaningful....great piece....10

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Seema Aarella 30 August 2009

You are a rebel......hence alienated from the mainstream, dont worry i am here for company....nice writes!

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Chitra - 30 August 2009

yes we do need more people like you, to realise the utopian concept of unity. well done

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 30 August 2009

don't discriminate people, in the name of ideology, physique or possession I don't love or hate people, ..............because it does not suit to your principles.otherwise your path is raeally fit one................you are postifve to all...good work....10 read mine.. i am novice.....

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Lady Grace 30 August 2009

to be an alien to yourself is really a great problem...its not a good sign..

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Mohammed Albalushi 30 August 2009

don't we need more aliens in the society? yes we need more, nice poem, well write dear

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Vaibhav Pandey 30 August 2009

very good thoughts sir.....full of wisdom...10

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Surya . 30 August 2009

well said. 'I'm an alien to the society, ' this is often felt by every one and you have brought it out beautifully.thanx voted 10 surya this

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Sathyanarayana M V S 30 August 2009

Who tell the naked truth become aliens to the society like Socretes. But keep acquiring knowledge and amassing wisdom and keep telling truth. You will never fail. The ultimate fruits are not what you perceive today........you get them when you deserve them as a pleasant surprise. sathya meva jayathe

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Patrick A. Martin 30 August 2009

Yes the more of us there are the merrier I'm an alian as well 10

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Sathyanarayana M V S 30 August 2009

Virtuous people feel alien to society. Socretes, Plato, Budda were all alien. When you say the Truth, you become an alien........But keep searching for the truth. throught wisdom keep telling the truth. Sathya meva jayathe

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Sathyanarayana M V S 30 August 2009

Virtuous people feel alien to society. Socretes, Plato, Budda were all alien. When you say the Truth, you become an alien........But keep searching for the truth. throught wisdom keep telling the truth. Sathya meva jayathe

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