Monday, May 11, 2009

I'M Always Rich Comments

Rating: 5.0

I eat only once in a noon
Sleeps empty watching moon
With dreams of silver spoon
Slips into sound sleep soon
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Kranthi Pothineni
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Joseph Poewhit 22 May 2009

Wealth is only a burden in life to carry.

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Louis Rams 13 May 2009

beautiful poem on suffering and faith.

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 13 May 2009

Blessed are the poor for they shall be comforted............ A Good Write..........

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Sathyanarayana M V S 13 May 2009

A poor man is richer than the rich. The kind of happiness one gets from contentment is not equalled by any amount of money and luxery.(Please read my poem What a feeling)

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Ashraful Musaddeq 12 May 2009

Lovely meaningful verse with nice ending. Love with 10.

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rago rago 12 May 2009

good write.........and meaningful too...........

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Eyan Desir 12 May 2009

Not bad does the last line has a mistake? anyway good write

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Joseph Poewhit 12 May 2009

Words pound like a hammer on life's things. Though with GOD you have a kingdom and a KINGS ransom.

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Catrina Heart 12 May 2009

It is better to be rich in our heart and soul than have the richness of this earthly things which we couldn't bring to the other world............fabulous end rhymes....10

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Kesav Easwaran 12 May 2009

To remain rich in heart always...i liked the good theme inside this write...nice rhyming effort, Kranthi...10

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 11 May 2009

A wonderful poem, Kranthi. Bitter reality, wisdom, irony, thoughts, flow and rhyme you have altogether blended in this poem........10/10. Best Wishes Naseer

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lovely use of rhymes.. to give a nice meaning.

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Janell Cressman 11 May 2009

very good poem! ! ! ! i really like your flow and the way you use words! ! !

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