Monday, March 16, 2009

I'M Always Here When Needed Comments

Rating: 2.0

I want to make things better,
yes I want to make them right.
But there's nothing I can do,
I really don't want to fight.
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Brianna Wilkinson
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Daryl Young 23 March 2009

This is really cool, and I love the angle of somebody else talking about what they see. Then becoming part of it in the end. Loved the flow and wording. I enjoyed it a lot. Please read and comment on my works. Rabbit

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Sandra Martyres 16 March 2009

A very touching piece indeed -10

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