Tuesday, November 24, 2009

I'M Alone Comments

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Im alone in the dark,
I don't see a clue or a mark,
It seems like this place is haunted,
And it also feels like whoever comes here is exempted,
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Sherbanu Molu
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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 27 November 2009

Nice poem… ‘eerie’ a very good coinage for the poetic situation… 10 Ms. Nivedita UK Cordially invite you read my poems [Why Hack My She ~ in Elite 500] with comments and…. niv

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Erica Johnson 24 November 2009

good poem... keep it up

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Eyan Desir 24 November 2009

Well written poem..........

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Joseph Poewhit 24 November 2009

Captures a feeling of hope. There is always tomorrow

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Sherbanu Molu

Sherbanu Molu

Mombasa, Kenya
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