Saturday, November 10, 2012

I'M Alone Comments

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I'm alone in the world of lie
Nowhere to live, nowhere to die
I feel like I'm dying everyday
But then it's a new day
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Marium Fatima
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* Sunprincess * 24 June 2014

.............nice write....we are all in this together...

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Kanav Justa 28 November 2012

aswum written, , , , specially rhe ending, , , ,

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Jahan Zeb 27 November 2012

You are not alone. Believe me you are not alone. And the last lines are amazing. Optimism I see in it. Goooood

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Asif Andalib 27 November 2012

Great poem. You will become a great poetess inshaAllah

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