I'm Alive Comments

It comes suddenly Like the break of a dam Water flows ceaselessly.....It breaks down your defensive wall..giving went to all the inspirations in your heart. expressive of the wounds, inner wounds........ thank u for all the images here in this poem. love your poem.. tony

It comes suddenly Like the break of a dam Water flows ceaselessly The beginning of a new dawn It's like submerging in water- - - The emotions that rise inside are so strong, it can not be held back.One day it come forth like water breaking the dam.It is the beginning of a new dawn- - -A story of a river flowing. A beautiful write, thanks for sharing.