I'm A Liar And Your A Fake Comments
the love I invested I never got back
and where does that leave me further down the track
you've got to be lied to to know the value of truth
I have some regrets, I've wasted my youth
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many thanks for the comments (sorry it's so negative, but it's better out than in) !
STrong emotions.expressions.good choice of words, flowing of emotions, it's really a great work.
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7/19/2025 1:21:00 PM # 1.0.0
wow...it's beautifully expressed..way much better than my poem! ! very nice...