Saturday, May 17, 2008

I'M A Hostage Of My Own Mind! Comments

Rating: 3.7

This free will I chose to confine.
A hunger I wish to bind.
Thoughts of a love I cannot define.
It's a life Idare not decline.
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Pirate Love Magic Man 13 November 2013

this is one of my favorite poems I composed...wish I could create more

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dam i love this poem, it describes how iv felt so many times befor =D this has to be a 10

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Indira Babbellapati 29 December 2008

that's what we call the snarl of 'maya' in hindu philosaphy...

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Jessica Nash 28 December 2008

Wow this is really a great poem. I understand what you mean. Feeling like your lost in your own mind.

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Crystal Pongi 02 December 2008

WOW! i love dis one! i dnt know whi but i love it! GREAT piece of work!

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Viola Grey 09 November 2008

curiosity has not yet killed this cat...and I know you know what I mean

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Ershad Mazumder 26 October 2008

Life is a prison. So why do you look for freedom. I love prison, because freedom makes me a God. So I became slave on my own. Thanks dear friend 04me

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Stacey Watts 17 September 2008

Freedom of the mind is hard at times to overcome. Wanting to find that release that your mind has on you is sometimes more difficult.. Very good poem..

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Ashraful Musaddeq 09 September 2008

A poem of different taste.

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DELETED NOW 11 July 2008

that makes me claustrophobic lol

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Emancipation Planz 20 June 2008

I've just read the previous three.. like this one the bestest... yes you will always be a Host (of your own mind) ... age may just free it! ! ! ! aroha PS... do something with that spelling immediately I say..

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Kayla Bakken 09 June 2008

excellent poem nice work.

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linzi- kidd 02 June 2008

you were right..i do like this... excellent writing! ! keep it up!

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