Tuesday, February 27, 2007

I'M A Hooker Comments

Rating: 4.8

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Ramona Thompson
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Joy Vanderhelm 27 February 2007

Gripping work. I like the spacing and the line breaks. It adds a frenetic energy and a desperation to the piece. Good work. Cheers, Joy

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David Taylor 27 February 2007

Its not what you do its why that you do it, Point well made through a structure which conveys speaking from the heart!

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