Sunday, September 11, 2011

I'M A Fool Comments

Rating: 1.9

I was stupid to think things could get better
I was stupid to think the pain would end
I was stupid to think love could be for me
For trusting you
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Wahab Abdul 21 March 2012

this is a very good poem as the feelings of the protagonist is real and deals with reality. please read my haiku s.

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Jessel Jane Tevar Toring 05 January 2012

not everyone else have a happy ending..but i like this poem..thank you for sharing it.

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Allemagne Roßmann 18 September 2011

i like the way u portray feelings here

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