wake or awake? hmm? not sure.
Who can smell how sweet your sweat......... this is good, though i'd perhaps write:
Who can smell your sweet sweat.............. maybe that's why i was at times obsessed with licking my third wife's armpits. could SHE have been diabetic? ?
what about a dog as a PAD....pee alert dog? good at night for kids AND for 'OLD' people too!
nice rhyming. and i think i've heard of such DADs. maybe you have done a good deed by alerting some readers to the possibility.
bri :)
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wake or awake? hmm? not sure. Who can smell how sweet your sweat......... this is good, though i'd perhaps write: Who can smell your sweet sweat.............. maybe that's why i was at times obsessed with licking my third wife's armpits. could SHE have been diabetic? ? what about a dog as a PAD....pee alert dog? good at night for kids AND for 'OLD' people too! nice rhyming. and i think i've heard of such DADs. maybe you have done a good deed by alerting some readers to the possibility. bri :)