Tuesday, July 1, 2014

I'M A Diabetic Alert Dog (Dad) Comments

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I'm proud of being a DAD,
Changing the life of a little lad.
Now he can forget,
A never ending threat.
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Stephen Katona
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Bri Edwards 26 April 2015

wake or awake? hmm? not sure. Who can smell how sweet your sweat......... this is good, though i'd perhaps write: Who can smell your sweet sweat.............. maybe that's why i was at times obsessed with licking my third wife's armpits. could SHE have been diabetic? ? what about a dog as a PAD....pee alert dog? good at night for kids AND for 'OLD' people too! nice rhyming. and i think i've heard of such DADs. maybe you have done a good deed by alerting some readers to the possibility. bri :)

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