Tuesday, January 20, 2015

I'M A Clever Crow Comments

Rating: 4.5

Why hello!
I'm a hooded crow.
I live in a park in Tel Aviv,
And I've a skill you'll never believe.
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Stephen Katona
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Bri Edwards 27 July 2017

another comment from me: tea is fish? ? ? i never knew that! i'm putting this cool poem into August 2017's showcase. Thanks. bri :)

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Bri Edwards 23 June 2015

to MyPoemList :) :)

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Bri Edwards 23 June 2015

the whole poem was fine, but my favorite part was: The next day I sat down to wait, And dropped a few crumbs as bait. How wise I was to plan ahead, For something better than just bread. great rhyming and storytelling. i wonder if bread will work when the U.S.. Olympic (women's) swim team is in the pool. hmmm? ok, they can be English swimmers also! maybe some fake medals would work better. did i say 'great rhyming'? bri ;)

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