Saturday, November 7, 2015

I'm A Child Once Again Comments

Rating: 5.0

I forgot what I have lost,
I love what I have found,
I lost my infancy,
I lost my childhood,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 14 April 2018

Amazing poem. I am so fascinated with persons who could go down to the level of a child and experience immense happiness. It shows the innate lovable personality of the poet. This piece depicts a happy family. A great write.10

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Khalida Bano Ali 04 January 2016

What a beautiful poem..............................................

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Free Bird 09 November 2015

I have created you for a theft I saw you forgot stealing, I am a child once again And here i am rating this poem again. With much respect. Thumbs are already up

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Seema Chowdhury 08 November 2015

An evocative and a reflective write, beautifully written

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Valsa George 08 November 2015

I steal chocolate and candies, I run on the stairs like a mouse, I see my grand children follow me, I sit on the roof in a cold winter, I enjoy what I stole from the cold pantry, I enjoy sharing it with my grandchildren. I remember my father doing the same with my children while they were young! By nature, he was fond of sweets. As he grew older, his love of sweets also grew! Really enjoyed your naughty escapades! I am sure you are having a wonderful time with your cute grand children

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M Asim Nehal 08 November 2015

Yet another oungent poem with a clear message.....Loved it, Janab....10+++

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Sanjukta Nag 08 November 2015

I was losing my childhood, and God made me read your poem. Thank you so much sir. This is a poem worth reading.100 on 10

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Kelly Kurt 08 November 2015

You are a wonderful grandfather and poet. I have never lost the child in me, and being around young ones brings it out in full force.

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Loke Kok Yee 08 November 2015

with children it's not a crime it's just the things they do in their time a lovely read-10 thank you sir

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Ruma Chaudhuri 07 November 2015

Excellent. It's a beautiful cute poem. Perhaps a little child always stay inside to every human. Best wishes. Ruma

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Ayman Parray 07 November 2015

A stellar write, Akhtar. Full of love, innocence, mischief and a wonderful message. My imagination soared the skies like an eagle as I was able to see you do all the wonderful things you do in this beautiful poem. Truly inspiring. Thank you.

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Chuy Amante 07 November 2015

this is briliant a nice peek back into those stealin-food days if stealing cookies is a crime call me the king of the dark side! nice write!

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Rajnish Manga 07 November 2015

Old age shows us the natural progression of life and the culmination of a rich lifelong experience. I agree every word of what you said and feel it is a blissful period where one can have a panoramic view of what has gone by. It is right that old age tends towards childhood. I forgot what I have lost, I love what I have found,

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