I Loved You Once Comments

nice, it tells a monotonous but true day. i like things like this everyday. thanks for share!

Very touching with wounderful soundful sentiment, its sweet but not sacharine, a nice depiction of adolescent feelings

This is a very good poem. Not the same, what I usually get. And it's understandable. I love it.

this is a very nice poem i like it, i enjoyed it too, keep it up, and continue writing and please read my poems.

This was pretty good. Keep writing and I'll keep reading. I especially liked the section about growing old. Something about the idea that someone will stick with you for the rest of your life really resonates...

this is beautiful sis. i love it. ur becoming just like me! ! ! :)

I really liked the flow, until the last couplet. It seemed an akward landing after a well executed dive. Good easy flow over all. Excellent for someone as young as yourself. Work it... make it perfect.

Your poem is among one of the better love poems i have read in recent times; yes; it has the usual bittersweet image but has a pure emotional perspective added to it....liked it! ! !

Arranged in sharp images, beautiful lines and bittersweet flavor inter layer each other..It really a good poem. Keep it up :) _Unwritten Soul

A beautiful poem, really good write!

wow thats really good! but never trully knw if they love back

if you put a tune to this it would make an awesome song