Sunday, August 23, 2009

I Loved You Comments

Rating: 2.7

I loved you with my hands,
I loved you underground;
You unveiled your master plan
Without making any sound.
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Jack Williams
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red rose of texas 05 May 2010

i like this but not all women are like that :) Kourtney O'Connor

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Bryan Alexander 27 August 2009

great ending and they always have a master plan...

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Anjali Sinha 27 August 2009

nice poem cute one i liked this -10 anjali

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Gershon Hepner 27 August 2009

Great poem. Fine structure and nice blind-man's bluff twist.

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Christopher Holmberg 26 August 2009

short and sweet, i like it.

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