I Love You, You Love Him Comments

this is great. it got me up in shock and amazement. anyway, the four words, you me, us and i. are carefully and nicely fitted in the poem. great set of rhythms and very apt title for a very realistic scenario

very well written and meaningful but simple enough language and style for everyone to understand nice!

Very powerfully expressed

that was some sick rhyming man. i like the 3 word lines making it an easy read but showing a lot of your character. well done :)

a good intention and rich poem..loved it dear friend 10/10

i am soo sorry...i have never felt this pain but i have seen many of my friends go through it...hang in there

I know it can pain...worse to an extent you pray you were dead

First off I love your name, it's a great poet name. Elias Barcelona, great ring to it! Second, great job on this one. I have only too recently experienced the same with a girl. It always seems great in the beginning...