Monday, November 10, 2008

I Love You Until My Death… Comments

Rating: 4.3

*You over heard me on the phone
*Saying there’s nothing here for me
*I know I hurt you so bad
*And I pray to god he sends me to hell
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JoDonna Lapahie
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Blue Eyes 20 November 2008

i love it especially the last part.

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Howard Johnson 14 November 2008

Nice piece, JoDonna, Enjoyed reading, and liked its message, , thank you for sharing..

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Great poem. Intense and wonderful!

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Julian Salvacion 10 November 2008

very romantic! ! ! at a young age you'd go a long way.10+ for me

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