I loved you when you didn't.
I loved you when you cried,
I loved you when you took those pills,
I loved you when you almost died.
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the repetition gives its effect atleast to me because by every i love you sentence you added showed me the amount of love aswel as loyalty you felt towards him. v.nice keep going
wow. sad... your poems are really nice, the emotions really show through.