Wednesday, October 8, 2008

I Love You Still Comments

Rating: 4.5

I loved you when you didn't.
I loved you when you cried,
I loved you when you took those pills,
I loved you when you almost died.
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Kayte Stacy
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Cain XXX 10 October 2008

wow. sad... your poems are really nice, the emotions really show through.

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Ayesha Sartawi 08 October 2008

the repetition gives its effect atleast to me because by every i love you sentence you added showed me the amount of love aswel as loyalty you felt towards him. v.nice keep going

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