She blew him a kiss
As they waved good-bye,
And whispered "I love you's"
On the wind.
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A beautiful and touching poem so lovingly penned. Well expressed and crafted.
A well penned poem. Truly sweet and lovely—- 5 stars*****
A sad but happy ending. " Parting is such sweet sorrow" . To meet again or never to meet " in thunder lightning or rain" ...restrain the refrain. Good poem.
The essence of separation that actually breaks us all but at one point or other we all have to go through this experience. The emotions just pour out telling the story. Thank-you for penning this.
The saddest of goodbye's. Very nice poem.
Thank you, Ray. The sad ones aren't always easy to write!