Saturday, May 4, 2013

I Love You. Not ≪/3 Comments

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You said those words
so easily.
You let me think
you cared.
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Freedom From Darkness
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Alex Medina 04 May 2013

I like the last two stanzas, the way you broke up the structure of the sentence. It flowed well and conveyed the message in a powerful manner. Keep writing, and keep loving. ;)

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Neela Nath Das 04 May 2013

Very nice indeed.Loved.

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