For the care
You rendered
Like a father or a mother,
Like the concern
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But you had always A pair of loving eyes that made me bath with a sense of safe laps like my mother's Very fine expressions of love and appreciation. tony
Write comment. Such a beautiful start, Prativa. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks
I have been read this poem more than 10 times.Now I am waiting for your next poem.
Wonderful poem it is.so amazing topic.Thanks for sharing your poetic thoughts.
I really enjoyed this poem. It so beautiful poem.100+++++++++
You loved me more, More than a lover would when a beloved is ugly no more that pretty like the day she met him.
A beautiful poem.i loved this poem. You have described it heartly. Thanks. 10++++
This is a great tribute to your life partner (your friend, philosopher and guide) ! You must have felt satisfied after completing this maiden poem! You could not have written better than what it is in current form! It's my pleasure revisiting this fabulous poem! Stay always blessed!
You have touched a very sensitive string and so many sitars have quivered at a time dear poetess.... Stunning depiction.. of your boundless love for your male teacher in honest but bold manner....Honestly speaking I have enjoyed the same from my beloved students...My students have adored me in the same way.....This is more than any prize for a teacher...
Thank you Devanshu Sir for being so honest, so straight forward to render such a heart touching compliment. I feel honoured and much inspired.
Rich flow of thoughts elegantly brought forth with clarity of mind. An absolutely pleasing write-up. Thanks for sharing Prativa and do remain enriched.
Thank you great poet for your care and love for unskilled ones like us.You inspired me a lot.
p.s. there seem to be hints by you that 'your' teacher/friend was/is ALSO a romantic partner for you. that does not have to be a problem, but it could be, especially for the teacher if you are 'underage' or he is married! bri :)
Thank you great poet for your care and love for unskilled ones like us.You inspired me a lot. Prativa
it IS unfortunate sometimes that people are related-to/judged-more by their outward appearance [['attractive' OR 'unattractive']] than by their thoughts, and actions, and words. i suppose there are pros and cons to being voluptuous and beautiful; perhaps you could write a poem about THAT? Then again, maybe it is NOT your photo. perhaps you are a 13 year old boy, tricking us! ! you DO seem (in the photo) to be putting forward some of your 'best assets'! ! ! bri :)
that made me bath with a sense of safe laps...........bath or bathe? and laps as in 'swimming laps' or 'thighs to be sitting on', like 'sitting in a mother's lap'? ? i don't understand your two lines. maybe your teacher is/was gay? ? i confess i would have a difficult time looking at you as a 17 year old and not noticing (and admiring) that your body had blossomed since you were age 10. to be continued......
i shall not be shy; your photo draws me in, like a bee to a flower. hee-hee. i'd use somewhere, not some where. i find that some other poets, i think with 'British English backgrounds sometimes break up words which i keep whole. to be continued...........
A rarest of rare heart And the purest of pure mind I would ever have I would ever live I would ever love And aloud I want to say I love you. Your love and respect for your teacher, who a fried, philosopher and guide to you, is beautifully expressed. Very heartening write. 10++++ Tanaya
A rarest of rare heart And the purest of pure mind I would ever have I would ever live I would ever love And aloud I want to say I love you. Your love and respect for your teacher, who a fried, philosopher and guide to you, is beautifully expressed. Very heartening write.
Uneasy, naked with dresses on fantastic line for your poem 10++++++++++++
A beautiful poem of gratitude