Saturday, July 11, 2009

I Love You My Moon Comments

Rating: 5.0

worry not my love
the wait will be rewarded
i will come like a wind
touch your skin and kiss your lips...
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lady grace
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Honest dealing with simple way neautifulpoem with clear heart in it. i liked it, most.. read mine... moon..oon lost and sun eclipse

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Catrina Heart 28 July 2009

Awwwww! ! ! Sigh...how romantic and tender this was...a poem of dedication. Heartfelt one my moonie friend...as what he said just a sunshine away! ! ! Thanks for sharing! ! !

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~*~Secretive Shelby~*~ 27 July 2009

Simple, but yet still strong. Very beautiful and creative It keeps your interest and i liked it very much Good Write, Shelby

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Rafique Farooqi 27 July 2009

Aimed to love like monsoon to make a rain.......Grace is always with wonders

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Shashendra Amalshan 25 July 2009

you know.. your words are so simple, yet the poems are so very beautiful... these are filled with emotions.. loved this read... with love shan

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Miriam Maia Padua 25 July 2009

very wonderful, my friend.. fragility and strength mingles together sweetness flows...as the moonlight showers her golden light... this is a very beautiful write for you...lucky you are.. Who's that unknown who adore you Moon? smile I love this, friend... (guilty me?) smilessss thanks for sharing 10++++ lovelots, Maia

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anytime i will come dark clouds can't block my way nor the terrors walking at night or predators looking for preys... strong and sincere desire.. lovely write and inspirational one.. iloved it....10 read mine moon...moon lost...dark clouds and sun

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Luwi Habte 23 July 2009

nice tribute well done I also love my mom more than anyone else thanks Lady Luwi

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Noel Horlanda 12 July 2009

Who is that moon? He's a lucky guy to have the loveliest poet in our midst.I love the first stanza, can't sleep every time I think about it, the handsomeness of the moon not the guy of course.. thanks

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Ted M 11 July 2009

You can feel the warmth. Nice write.

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Carol Gall 11 July 2009

like the wind to a waiting love wonderful lady

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Fay Slimm 11 July 2009

'I will come like a wind - - touch your skin and kiss your lips' - - these words spell such poetic magic - lovely verse - - - 10 + + + Fay.

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Sadiqullah Khan 11 July 2009

This is such a tribute, such love and affection. Your friend is truly lucky or you are lucky, keep wrting and thanks for sharing.10

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rago rago 11 July 2009

let me immensely enjoy the poem as written.........

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