I Love You Most When I Do Not Comments

Another brilliant poem Ben. Beautiful imagery and I particularly like the first stanza. The rhyme scheme I feel also contributed to the emotions conveyed and I thoroughly enjoyed it. Reading your work makes me want to snap my pencils, tear up my work and let it blow away on the wind, back and forth as I could never hope to be as talented as you! Keep writing! xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

A lovely write, a lovely read, a lovely moving and beautifully produced piece of writing. A real joy to have found it. Thanks so much. Loved it. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

The other lost his tongue; it killed itself in spite ... tongue is the most wickedest part of the body. fine development here, Ben. Night would not exist without the moon, nor life itself. ~~sjg