I Love You, Goodbye Comments

Once there was this girl I liked but I let her go Because of her family, Well it hurts so much Sometimes We must let go of want we love Because it will not work...I think your inspiration come from your life The work shows so much love..My goodness this is a rich substance for poetry My love died a long time ago....I'm so broken up, Its hard loving I guess thats one of the reasons I'm here trying to love again.... I enjoyed this....10+

I am new......... here tread climbing down used for mountain alone either it should be climbing or just wandering in the mountains, hermit in the ocean but hermit solitude on the earth..... in the ocean there is no solitude because the rhythm fails.... unfourtunate every one appreciated thali......... any how fine poem and good piece to read...... life is to smile smile smile............

Deep, well thought out poem dealing sensitively with a very tricky subject, braver than I.10 Catrina well done

your words are so beatiful these flow catrina 10

First class verse Catrina - - filled with breathtaking imagery - - must be worth far more than 10 - - loved it...... Fay.

my dear loveliest angel living in the heart alive.......... proceed with smile smile smile...............

emotional lines.... well wriiten congrats and regards sandhya