Thursday, February 28, 2008

I Love You Even More Comments

Rating: 3.5

I loved you before you were born and
I looked forward to the day you arrived.
I was the happiest Mother
In the whole wide world and
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Carla Hart Ruber
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Louise Hernan 28 November 2011

Hi Carla - This is such a beautiful poem - and I'm sure alot of people can identify with it. I like that you wrote it in everyday language - easy to read and understand - and the emotions really come thru too. Nice job! :)

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