If you will remember my eyes
Light will be with your desire.
Oh my god, how many guys
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CREATIVE TOO! ! ! ! great job! that earns a 10+++ plus plus.. plus!
This acrostic piece reads like the libretto for a blues song. An unusual poem - honest, romantic and all the more interesting for that. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
And remember, I'm not bad....... this expresses ur true love dear...... good write
You don't leave me this day Oh, just be with me, i ask you, please... Umbrages? .. Let them to get away................ love hates umbrage being deeper all reeks melts away......most passionate and ingenious by imagery, well penned, thanks for sharing
I loved your composition. Nice work.