Monday, June 15, 2009

I Love You, Dear Comments

Rating: 4.9

If you will remember my eyes

Light will be with your desire.
Oh my god, how many guys
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Prakash Mehra 07 December 2009

I loved your composition. Nice work.

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Alandra Moreira 14 July 2009

CREATIVE TOO! ! ! ! great job! that earns a 10+++ plus plus.. plus!

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Marieta Maglas 19 June 2009

lovely piece well penned....10+

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Emma Adamyan 19 June 2009

i liked this one Alex. its cute, thx :)

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Alison Cassidy 18 June 2009

This acrostic piece reads like the libretto for a blues song. An unusual poem - honest, romantic and all the more interesting for that. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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And remember, I'm not bad....... this expresses ur true love dear...... good write

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Dr.subhendu Kar 15 June 2009

You don't leave me this day Oh, just be with me, i ask you, please... Umbrages? .. Let them to get away................ love hates umbrage being deeper all reeks melts away......most passionate and ingenious by imagery, well penned, thanks for sharing

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