Monday, October 29, 2012

I Love You But I'M Done! Comments

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Does love means hurting?
If it does why didnt you tell,
The time you introduced it or
You must have forgotten...?
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SINDISWA S. MNGUNI C'NDY
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Ezediuno Louis Odinakaose 01 November 2012

I HADN'T READ DIS WEN I SAID UR WORK IS /ARE SINCER AND REAL... AND I LIK UR FLOW... DECISION MAKIN EVEN WHEN U DONT WANA... SHOWS THE POET A STRONG PERSON RUNIN AGAINST UR OWN WILL... DESIRE...FEELINS.... EMOTION MIXED LIK.... LIK SWEET AND BETTER.... CUP OF COFFEE I CAL IT. UR LINES AM FALLIN INLOV WT. that is/was my birthday.... love(d) you...though. HOW U MERGED THE PRESENT AND PAST 2GEDA SHOW CONTINUITY.... GREAT WORK

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