Friday, May 12, 2017

I Love You But I Don't Comments

Rating: 4.8

When I first glanced at your pictures
my eyes both saw you
When I heard your voice the first time
my ears both ensued
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Simon Chamoun
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Jazib Kamalvi 12 August 2017

A good attempt in the chapter of love, Simon. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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I wish I could renew your hopes... or change my ways... But you clearly know that, Hypocrisy is a part of my nature... I love day dreaming... and making up stories full of passion, wisdom and whatever my mood feels like at the moment... reality is tough... and if I didn't have a vivid imagination... I would've be just another person .....

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