Tuesday, January 15, 2019

I Love You As You Are Comments

Rating: 5.0

No one is nor art thou without some flaws,
But each thine flaw, dear, endearingly irks,
It strange seems; I dare say without a pause,
I'm yet to see two old friends with no quirks.
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Dr Dillip K Swain 16 January 2019

If a thing of art has to be alive, Forget the fault of faultless offering.....pragmatic expression! A poem of great value and substance.......10

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Aniruddha Pathak 16 January 2019

Thank you Dr Swain, as always you are spot on. You have picked up the best of lines in the poem.

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Mahtab Bangalee 15 January 2019

truly said-Lifeless perfection seems a virtual trash

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Aniruddha Pathak 15 January 2019

Yes, love is love if it is despite the flaws of the loved one, not because of some good qualities. Thank you Mahtab.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 15 January 2019

Humor expressed in this poem expresses perfection of the poet. This is difficult to tell a mortal man as faultless but we can tell that one should try to gain righteousness. Love should be maintained in life. An amazing poem is beautifully penned.10

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Aniruddha Pathak 15 January 2019

Thank you Kumarmani Mahakul, you are kind, generous, and as always wise.

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