Sunday, November 29, 2009

I Love You And Miss You Dad! Comments

Rating: 5.0

The day you died a pice of me died
too because i love you but i don't remember you,
I am sorry dad for being a brat,
but what could you do the only thing
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Moonbee Canady 03 December 2009

This Was A Very Touching and Beautiful Write... Tugs At The Hearstrings... It is also good sometimes, to let our feelings out on paper, It really helps... My Mom died when I was younger too... We Never Get Over The Death of A Loved One, But with Time, It Gets A (little easier) To Bear... Keep Writing, Kiddo, You've Got Talent... MoonBee (Oh, and I almost forgot, the comment you made regarding my poem 'My Shield, My Sentinel', yes Rosa, If You Put Yourself in God's Hands, He Does Indeed, Watch Over Us Personally... That Is The Honest - Truth... God Bless You and Keep You, Little One... MoonBee

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Romeo Della Valle 01 December 2009

Love is always love, no matter the time of lance of time or space...well-penned..you got my vote...10+++keep it up, you have plenty to show the whole world, .....(hope you can read my newly posted titled 'A LOVE'S DESIRE', enjoy it, comment and rated it, thanks for sharing, Love and Peace, Romeo

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