Friday, November 4, 2011

I Love You Although I'Ve Never Met You Comments

Rating: 4.6

In my life you are a beautiful dream,
but in my dream you are mine.
You are the soul and the blood stream,
that could make me an eternal life.
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Abdallah Gamal
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Dave 22 August 2022

Should there be a scenario where you meet a woman and feel love her and she won't meet you? Busy is not an answer! Right. There go the poem feflects

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Dave 22 August 2022

This is kinda perfect. I'm new to a mental intimate relationship mentally and physically thru words! We've never met and I wonder why and as her and I call unconventional!

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Preitty Nayarr 01 January 2015

Fell in love with the wordings...loved it keep it up! !

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Darlene Walsh 23 December 2014

This is a lovely but sad poem, well written and it flows very nicely. Having love that only exists in dream, longing for love that you can not touch, is very sad.

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Nalini Jyotsana Chaturvedi 23 December 2014

Beautiful words magical touch...such mature writing :) . I enjoyed it thoroughly.

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Mihaela Pirjol 09 September 2014

A lovely poem... Ideal Love...a sweet and candid expression of a dreamt love.

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Leslie Sharp 29 August 2014

I thought it was very beautiful. That is what shines thru when we let go of baggage that weights us down in life! It is not a easy path to follow all the jagged corners of the soul. But what waits beyond that dark veils of are souls surely must be heaven! Because we are free to fly. And death holds no grip on us.

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Alisha A. 22 August 2013

This such a sweet poem! I love it! :)

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Heather Wilkins 21 June 2013

beautiful touching write. I can equate with this poem. so lovely the thought I love you though I have never met you.

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Makala Kuhle 10 December 2012

I still absolutely love this poem. I love it more every time I read it.

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Mary Medina 19 September 2012

This is so radiant. I really enjoyed reading this.

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Amanda Yates 07 September 2012

Really beautiful. I've got a tear in my eye while reading it.

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Tsbiyah Bat Yah 06 September 2012

I love this it is so beautiful sorry it took me so long to respond havent been on here in a long time...i look forward to seeing more i am such a fan now [3 -Sylvia Perry

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Sherlyn Davis 03 May 2012

very nice friend, i love it

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Lenore Lee 29 April 2012

Abdallah, what a gorgeous poem, so bittersweet and heartfelt. I love it.

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Erica Santana 09 March 2012

I like this poem well express

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Roy Davenport 29 December 2011

Abdallah, I was very moved emotionally by your poem, I Love You Although I; ve Never Met You, You captured the feelings that many of us experience in our lives if we live long enough. You are a very gifted poet young man. Please keep posting and I will gladly read them and give you my thoughts.

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Theany Ouy 02 December 2011

Well expressed and put onto words. I enjoyed every lines of it. Simple yet insightful. Nice piece, thanks for sharing...

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Gretchen Colour 30 November 2011

That's real sweet :)

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sara }i{ 21 November 2011

Luv it......Keep writing :)

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