Tuesday, July 22, 2008

I Love You...A Little Bit. Comments

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You're sugar deep in all my ash,
But place no blame on me.
Never did your heart I stash.
My soul you'll never see.
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Kyle Shield Laster
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Liz Thaugally 22 July 2008

Nice write Kyle, there are all sorts of love, including loving someone a little bit- all a myriad of reasons, your poem reflects this beautifully- I like the line ' you're sugar deep in all my ash'. Lizelah

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Xxx Xxx 22 July 2008

i love you a little bit...sometimes, it's the key, i've been loving most of the time...just a little bit

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Kyle Shield Laster

Kyle Shield Laster

Clarksdale, Mississippi
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