Friday, November 21, 2014

I Love You Comments

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when i lose my charms and glamour
when i'm old and winkle;
when i cannot look myself in the mirror;
i will always stare at you, because i love you
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Mysia Hayling 28 November 2014

The poem is a nice one although it has a few grammatical errors, I think you should fix. However other than that a very lovely piece of work.

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