I Love You. Comments

Fine and lofty verse written in persuasive expressions with conviction. Well conceived and nicely brought forth. Thanks for sharing Gary.

Love is the key about life! Loving her is all that you need. Nice work.

A deeply touching write with a love that is beauty written with a great heart!

.....very nice...with lots of emotion ★

I wonder if this poem is written about your mother's love. About whoever or whatever it may be, the poem is touchy! The last two lines are really so! Best wishes, and happy writing!

You made me cry...I thought at first it was a moment you sharing because you were happy but then the last line two lines tells the sad you feel at losing her...beautiful written thanks for sharing

lots of feeling.... its awsm poetry

I feel the pain and meaning behind this. It is a very touching, sad poem. I love it :)

An interesting poem the line about in went the final piece to her tomb is a bit frightening and i cant help but wonder what your thoughts were when you wrote it. Well done