Wednesday, December 21, 2011

I Love You Comments

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I love you with a permanence
That endures the passing years.
I love you with a joyfulness
That subdues all doubts and fears.
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khalid ily cara
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Chinedu Dike 18 October 2014

A lovely romantic poem, well articulated and nicely penned to capture the essence of the love for her. The use of appropriate Similes gives the poem mature outlook, while driving home the conviction of the poet. A good piece indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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