Tuesday, July 20, 2010

I Love You Comments

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You know i love you.
i guess that´s why you dont watch what to you say to me
you know i love you
but that aint weakness, that doesnt define me
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jasmine muthoni
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majid Alsaady 25 July 2010

repition exposed the lover/sacrifice even dignity is a sign of deep love / the mind being troubled by the heart feels lonely / cant stop loving /once charmed love makes you weak/ that is what your poem exposed / very nice and simple language.thanks for pleasure of the complete surrender to love

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Dr.subhendu Kar 20 July 2010

heart when latches on to love deep, evocative too, thanks for sharing

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veronique buea pre 20 July 2010

wow that is wonderful i loved it!

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Marina Gasbey 20 July 2010

Awwww! That is so sweet! But very sad... I'm sorry if you've had loss... Marina...

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