I Love You Comments

The poem expressed your true feelings for your love, though it needs a bit of comprehensiveness, the rhythm is already there, but I felt there’s something missing, I have the feeling like I am hanging on the air. Anyways, yes, when we are in-love, we could not eliminate jealousy… that’s part of it because we care… but the good thing is that you must learn to control it. Do not put your head on your fear of losing the one you love, if you don’t really want to lose him… it is the only main advise I want to give you. “Fearing and worrying is praying for something you do not ike”. Ok? Keep smiling and keep on writing! :)