I Love You Comments

I love you in every whare What did you done fot it? love is everywhere.love will follow you.....10

I very much enjoyed having opportunity to meet you. I've written something fairly simple but if you wouldn't mind correcting it, I would be very grateful! Also if you could add some things to make it sound better that would be fantastic! sincerely, shivashanmugam.(shivayadav)

your name shanmugam or shiv yadav, it is confusing. I love you in every whare [no need of in] What did you done fot it? [ did to have] I have fell in love with you [fell to fallen] Amazing with love on you [for your amazing nature] Don't think am a crazy boy[ add I befire am] I kept in mind that fine day You quanch my thirst thare[thare to there] Seeing love every whare [whare to where] Hoping you will be thare..[thare]. sorry for intrusion. you may edit before you publish. shan

Dear friend, there are some glaring spelling mistakes, which takes out the beauty of the writing..............please edit and then present for public view..............

Very good. The last two lines are stunners. Reminds the Hindi song 'naa hai ye paana, naa khonee ki hai....' from Jab we met.

Nice for a person to be there

Nice poem some spellings are wrongs or maybe that's your way of expressing your self...