Monday, November 9, 2015

I Love You Comments

Rating: 4.5

So many times i've told you
So many times i've reminded myself

It keeps beating in my heart
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Amadai Nicolas
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Chinedu Dike 26 November 2015

A lovely depiction of voyage of bliss - a spiritual experience that is love, which affects all and sundry profoundly. A well articulated piece of poetry nicely penned with conviction. Thanks for sharing Amadai. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Hanna Maria 09 November 2015

great structure simple and short sometimes we can better convey our feelings with a small amount of words rather than a long paragraph. great job keep at it!

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Amadai Nicolas 09 November 2015

Thanks Hanna :)

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