So many times i've told you
So many times i've reminded myself
It keeps beating in my heart
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great structure simple and short sometimes we can better convey our feelings with a small amount of words rather than a long paragraph. great job keep at it!
A lovely depiction of voyage of bliss - a spiritual experience that is love, which affects all and sundry profoundly. A well articulated piece of poetry nicely penned with conviction. Thanks for sharing Amadai. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.