Tuesday, January 6, 2009

I Love You Comments

Rating: 4.3

YOUR EYES AS BLUE AS THE SKY
YOUR HAIR AS WHITE AS SNOW
YOUR SMILE BRIGHTENS MY DAY
AND YOUR HANDS SO SOFT TOUCHING MY FACE
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LUZAAN de Bruyn
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Luzaan You have expressed your feelings beautifully in this poem as they led up to the grand finale, the three words that were so important to you. Just lovely.....Karin Anderson

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Fay Slimm 06 January 2009

Nicely pesented and rhymned, Luzaan - - and tihis reads with a soft undertone with adequate metre....... well done

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angel unknown 06 January 2009

COOL...........................................

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