YOUR EYES AS BLUE AS THE SKY
YOUR HAIR AS WHITE AS SNOW
YOUR SMILE BRIGHTENS MY DAY
AND YOUR HANDS SO SOFT TOUCHING MY FACE
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Nicely pesented and rhymned, Luzaan - - and tihis reads with a soft undertone with adequate metre....... well done
Luzaan You have expressed your feelings beautifully in this poem as they led up to the grand finale, the three words that were so important to you. Just lovely.....Karin Anderson