Bite by bite
I taste you
Kiss by kiss
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Lordy.... what a passionate write... I love it, your passion for your muse is palpable in this one. HG: -) xx
Thrust by thrust I posses you these lines send a deep message, which only awoman can feel and only man could understand. this poem is wonderful. i could sense ypur poetical skill6666
Such a slick and sleek poem. Love is what this world's about. Your poem is really great!
You express your love with clarity and musicality. Your poem has an absence of clutter. It is accessible and pretty to read. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
wooooooo! weeee! weeee! what a lovely poem! style of expression new tasteful! 10++++
Complete absorption of ones love. It's a great poem with a simplicity that made it wonderful
great coining of words wich made it simple bt meaningful...............thnx
the most exploited word in the world today, yet very touching to feel, a feeling that goes beyond words it say.... what a wonderful piece of poem you made... God bless
wow.......what a lucky man he is