It seems that will never pass
The precious life we have
It seems that will never fade
The memories kept in mind
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nice poem....describes the beautiful relationship of a father and a daughter....
Aunt, uncle, grandpa, grandma, etc... cannot substitute your own parents, that is what i feel of your poem. good piece! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! 10++++++++++
ILY the most euphonic utterance and ably poetically presented.. Enjoyed… 10 Ms. Nivedita UK
that is a very lovely poem and i like it alot and its fantastic
the father in me says: vow! what a nice daughter! lovely poem pleasing to mind Luwi...10
wowwwww, it`s soo wonderful when u can say these words abt ur father. he must be a great man. lucky u
Great compassion. Ten dr.sakti Please visit my page and comment
a truly lovely poem Luwi from an all too unused perspective Heath
a very good poem, I rate with 10. I suggest to ad 'to my father' immediatly after title, and not to explain at the end: I wrote this poem for my father's love. best greetings.
Deep affection for your father well expressed in this piece..
A lovely dedication for your father. It is heart warming and I can see he is very special to you. Top marks. Karin
love poem to a father....don't get too much of these....must be a wonderful man!
King of heart is happiness and this is guarded by love. The expression of feelings is done nicely in this excellent poem. There is always deep affection tween father and daughter. You are definitely a blessed daughter. This poem is a nice tribute to your father.10