I Love You Comments

wow your best so far can't get any better than this! ! ! ! ! Remember that you can write a peom any way you like.

Ali, your best poem to date, Don't try so hard to rhyme every poem. Write from your heart, then edit from your head. Good luck...

Short, sad and sweet. Try your hardest to conquer your fears......because I know that those 3 words can change a life Keep up the great writing! Dona