I Love You Comments

wonderful lyric poem, deep feelings well embedded 10/10

love poem written from the heart with deep feelings on until the after life fine poem Ariel thanks+++++10 regards

a good concept exploded nicely.10 marks shan

Beautiful Poem Ariel, its a wonderfull way to write... Thanks for comment on my poem also.... Hope to talk to you later... Take Care

beautiful love poem........

kani nga poem nimo ba, kay makahuna huna dod kog tyabaw..waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa...kay murag inenglish ra dod ni xa..pwede mohimo anig lines sa ubos? ... daghang bitoon ni isa way naako daghang bulak ni isa, way ning dunol ASA RA ANG SUNDANG BI... KADTONG KANG LAPULAPU GIKAN KAY MAO TOY GAMITON NAKU SA PAG HIWA SA BUAYA NGA AKONG NADAKPAN UG HIMOONG INUN UNAN.... UY WALA KO MOINGON NGA MOKATAWA KA UY..DILI MAN GANI NI KATAW ANAN...BLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE..ATIK ATIK RA GANI..BLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE...MAKAKAON KAHA TA SA BUAYA..KAGAHI POD UY..

A really beautiful poem Ariel and with nice flow and tender message. Thank you for commenting on my poem Night Sky Senryu poem. 10 love Karin

Wonderful meaning ful poem.

This is amazing! You feel so strong for this person, its heart shattering! Wow is all I can say! ! ! PLEAZE write more things like this! ! -your friend Ken

Well, that made me cry.... it is tender and filled with emotion....

beautiful and very hearthfel and love are flowing in this poem....thank you kabayan.

Thank you for the comment. This poem is very inspiring- and well written

love touches the heart of every human in this universe..love of such intensity and passion is exquisite...very beautifully written and thanks for the comment.... u write really heart-touching poems and i especially loved this one

Thank you for the comment, I very much enjoyed this piece. Deep and ever true.

Nice poem with the depth of meanings, see the poem grammatically, it is not to discourage you, I myself am not a native english writer too. I may help you in this regard if you feel it hard. Send your poem to me through email, I shall check its grammar and return to you then upload it where ever you wish. When I am dead and darkness reign My body decays but the soul remain When I am dead and darkness reigns My body decays but the soul remains shanazar@hotmail.com I think you will not mind. Shanazar

'this earth is just a mere river'...'I love you till you are by my side'...Deep call to deep. Thank you!

ur words have power and togather touch the meaning of the feelings... I love it!

Your poem rings so true, Ariel. Your words carry your love on their wings. The bliss of universal harmony flows through the lines. I particularly like the stanza: 'this earth is just a mere river Creatures lives are its water Death.... the mightiest current That brings all to world beneath' Excellent poem. love, Allie xxxx

You have done a lot by putting into words what many ponder about the here and after. The re-assurance of the next world, superior to this, creates a feeling of bliss and satisfaction in the reader. Thanks Ariel Escalona

very nice poem, well done. x