I love you
Illusive intrusions like thunderous voices
Blowing my mind away….
I am here to conceal the chronology
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A really, really beautiful piece... I'm amazed by your thoughtfulness and your choice in words.
this is a very beautiful and lovely poem indeed... i see you v expressed your innermost feelings through this one.. nice sir! ! ! ! .. with lots of love shan
Poem had a different shades of lov... Sensibly write each nd every word... A refine love with pour emotions... Wonderful dear +10 as alwayz
'ur sadness is my funeral, ur happiness is my survival'...there s no such other wrd ill use for ths as comment...very good very nice, ...in short, , , , , EXCELLENT..
A magnificent piece, absolutely beautiful, you are a true poetic artist.
your emotion and rhythm are really touching and spontaneous, it is clear what you wish to express... exquisite piece! !
the words just seem so natural. naturally beautiful. naturally inspirational. and naturally the words of this poem speak from the heart and the words clearly tell of love and all it's strong emotions. best wishes -Kathryn Thurman
so spontaneous! SO beautiful...such easy flow.... of words in love........
Do we need another love? iam sure the answer will be no, lovely art
Love poem always catches up my eyes, and this one poem clearly symbolizes so many things one may feel when they fall in love.. Very nice works..
Your poem reminds me of how I feel about my ex.. Such pure intentions, genuine love...Sadly that can be misinterpreted and thrown away for nothing... Great write.. Brought back good memories for me...
beautiful! ! ! I believe you found a perfect way to descrive love! ! : D I love it! !