Saturday, November 1, 2008

*** I Love You *** Comments

Rating: 4.5

I love you
Illusive intrusions like thunderous voices
Blowing my mind away….
I am here to conceal the chronology
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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof
COMMENTS
Anabel just Anabel 14 July 2009

beautiful! ! ! I believe you found a perfect way to descrive love! ! : D I love it! !

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Wyndon Villafuerte 09 July 2009

A really, really beautiful piece... I'm amazed by your thoughtfulness and your choice in words.

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Shashendra Amalshan 28 June 2009

this is a very beautiful and lovely poem indeed... i see you v expressed your innermost feelings through this one.. nice sir! ! ! ! .. with lots of love shan

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Apurva Gore 30 May 2009

This is a wonderful poem.

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Madeline Berry 20 May 2009

Wonderful, original and witty :) Great reading

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Surayya Abbas 26 April 2009

Very original.Absolutely right.

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Kiracakes09 . 21 January 2009

utter love and value... your metaphors amaze me

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sumaira .....ir 21 January 2009

Poem had a different shades of lov... Sensibly write each nd every word... A refine love with pour emotions... Wonderful dear +10 as alwayz

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O Anna Niemus 09 January 2009

a song of eternal love

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Naidz Ladia 16 December 2008

'ur sadness is my funeral, ur happiness is my survival'...there s no such other wrd ill use for ths as comment...very good very nice, ...in short, , , , , EXCELLENT..

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Judy Tornadojudy 10 December 2008

this is a good one colmes from a true poet

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Melvina Germain 10 December 2008

A magnificent piece, absolutely beautiful, you are a true poetic artist.

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Sankar Sarkar 30 November 2008

your emotion and rhythm are really touching and spontaneous, it is clear what you wish to express... exquisite piece! !

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Kathryn Marie Thurman 29 November 2008

the words just seem so natural. naturally beautiful. naturally inspirational. and naturally the words of this poem speak from the heart and the words clearly tell of love and all it's strong emotions. best wishes -Kathryn Thurman

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Malini Kadir 29 November 2008

so spontaneous! SO beautiful...such easy flow.... of words in love........

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Ema Nekaf 23 November 2008

Good structure

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*Trusting You* 16 November 2008

I love the ending good job.

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Mohammed Albalushi 16 November 2008

Do we need another love? iam sure the answer will be no, lovely art

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Kite Remedy 14 November 2008

Love poem always catches up my eyes, and this one poem clearly symbolizes so many things one may feel when they fall in love.. Very nice works..

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Derrick Andrews 13 November 2008

Your poem reminds me of how I feel about my ex.. Such pure intentions, genuine love...Sadly that can be misinterpreted and thrown away for nothing... Great write.. Brought back good memories for me...

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