I love you
Not for what
You're striving to be
Or for what
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Beautiful, beautiful poem...it has a feeling that surrounded the reader, volatile and vulnerable one. Love the expression you shared here. To have someone to share life joy and pain with trust, giving and take is wonderfully felt in your poem. Indeed a beautiful poem Ric!
Soul, it makes me so happy that you believe this to be such a beautiful poem!
It's such a wonderful poem. Love means accepting the person you love in his or her wholeness even though at times some action or reaction may not be to your liking. Following lines are quite noteworthy: Not only your awesome smiles That brighten even my worst days But your frowns that admonish
A marvelous poem of love that holds us spellbound. It captures an encompassing love. Elegantly crafted and well presented. 10
To hold the reader spellbound is such a HUGE compliment. Greatly appreciated, Rose Marie!
Nice expression of all various sides of love.
Thank you so much, Carl!