Wednesday, September 12, 2007

I Love When You Do That Comments

Rating: ★5.0

Come here, touch me,
I love it when you do that.
Come here, whisper in my ear,
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Alison Cassidy 18 September 2007

It's good to see your sense of humour peeping through this piece. Good flow and a satisfying ending. love, Allie xxxx

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Red Blooded Black Hearted 16 September 2007

good work. The ending was harsh, but cute.

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Angela Barker 12 September 2007

Loved the ending, pun intended.

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Marcia Morris 12 September 2007

Nice little write. The ending made me giggle a bit.

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