Tuesday, May 3, 2005

I Love To Watch You Comments

Rating: 3.3

I love to watch you
My eyes become moths drawn by a flame
And you flicker in directions
That are fingers and thumbs on a guitar that’s playing
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Natasha Ashwe
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Linda Weischedel 31 December 2007

Excellent poem, I found it to flow with great wording! ! !

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Original Unknown Girl 06 September 2007

Superb.... I'm mesmerised by guitar playing too, or anyone who has the ability to make music! You captured that perfectly. HG: -) xx

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Jon Lloyd 10 November 2005

Flow, rhythm and beauty...mmm!

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Max Reif 29 October 2005

'pet dementia' I don't get, but 'pickpocket lovers' is incredible. Yeah, you're an artist and poet!

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Natasha Ashwe

Natasha Ashwe

Kingston, Ontario.
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