I love to watch you
My eyes become moths drawn by a flame
And you flicker in directions
That are fingers and thumbs on a guitar that’s playing
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Superb.... I'm mesmerised by guitar playing too, or anyone who has the ability to make music! You captured that perfectly. HG: -) xx
'pet dementia' I don't get, but 'pickpocket lovers' is incredible. Yeah, you're an artist and poet!
Excellent poem, I found it to flow with great wording! ! !