Oh yes this is absolutely true
your smile is the most gorgeous
and is filled with promises
of love and dreams from you
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When smile is responded by smile, a soft corner is created in the hearts, one may not be aware of this corner as it might be in a very deep corner of the sub-conscious.
So true a feeling is hidden within those lines. A cry a longing for a little smile which can win both the hearts to eternity........ loved it I write a line from my poem My morning bud of rose : - - Glittering bids of pearl are dropping with her smile..........
This poem will return that smile a thousandfold. Well done :) :) :)
A smile makes the difference. A smile makes the day worth living. Beautifully expressed. Thank you.
as all these comments are placed you have a smile on your face. :)
A genuine and delightful smile from anyone, especially from a loved one lights up our day! Your friend referred to must be relishing this sweet poem more than anyone! !
I envy that smile... I visualise the duo here smiling at each other to no end.... If all were to smile like this!
A a smile from someone is a wonderful gift. Lovely poem Rachel.
.. this a very sweet write.. it would mean a lot to him if his smile could make you smile... its these small things that counts in friendship and makes it stronger...
This poem made me think about how my kids make me smile when they are having fun and enjoying life. x