Tuesday, January 7, 2014

I Love The Sea My Way Comments

Rating: 4.8

I would've perhaps liked to swim in you O' sea
only if sharks and octopi didn't inhabit thee

Perhaps I would've swum and dived deeper in glee
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s.zaynab kamoonpury
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Mohammad Younus 12 April 2024

Your verses paint a vivid picture of the allure and dangers of the sea. It's a realm of both fascination and trepidation, where the beauty of marine life clashes with the fear of its predators. Your sister's fear of flying roaches adds a humorous touch to the tale of bravery and hesitation

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Sando Hussam 11 May 2023

I love to swim in sea. Where water is calm and you feel as if you are with nature and self.

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The Original Tom Maxwell 10 November 2022

About seventy per cent of our body is water we need it to survive, to much can kill us, what's interesting most solid objects sink fast and frozen water, ice, floats

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Dr. Antony Theodore 21 August 2022

a great poem. i like your reflection. ocean, you vision, peace and joy on the shore. i like your poem dear poet. tony

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Dr. Antony Theodore 21 August 2022

So I'm content with reading, watching aquatic seafaring tales of olden ships, wrecked vessels, treasure troves and blue whales But on a sandy beach I can sit all day The sight of water so refreshing I must say

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Kim Barney 10 February 2022

Have read and commented on this before. Very enjoyable reading. I've never been attacked by sharks or piranhas, but I HAVE been stung by a sting ray!

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Maria Mitea 24 November 2021

Great work, s.z!

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Thomas Case 23 November 2021

Very good job, I enjoyed this.

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Smoky Hoss 15 March 2021

Beautiful poem, wonderful vision.

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bri edwards 08 February 2021

Best wishes. bri ;)

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bri edwards 08 February 2021

CONT. 4 - I like this poem VERY MUCH. The only question i have is 'do piranhas live in ocean? ' The answer is NO. They live in Amazon River and lakes. BRI ;)

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bri edwards 08 February 2021

cont. 3 - I found a comment at my poem, left by 's z k'. I clicked on the author's name. This took me to her PH page showing a list of her poems.

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bri edwards 08 February 2021

cont. 2 - the first Google selection allowed me to go to my poems on PH. There i clicked on one of my listed poems.

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bri edwards 08 February 2021

In order to get to this page, I did these: 1- I Googled 'poemhunter bri edwards'. (cont.)

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bri edwards 08 February 2021

I've not been able to sign in to PH, by clicking its 'Sign in' button for several days, including today.

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Susan Williams 24 January 2021

I feel the same way about swimming, diving, playing in the ocean---I don't even want to be on the ocean! ! ! Give me a horse and I shall ride, if God wanted me in the ocean he would have made me with fins and scales and huge dangerous teeth!

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David Wood 21 January 2021

I have been there as a diver, dived to 40 metres, dived wrecks, dived with pilot whales too. I've explored ship wrecks, submerged aircraft and helicopters both day and night. You have a lovely poem.

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Leeann Azzopardi 09 June 2020

I am with you. I'm afraid of sharks and jellyfish especially. Please read my poem " Miami Beach" and comment on it and I hope it brings a smile

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Chinedu Dike 04 March 2020

Beautifully expressed thoughts and feelings elegantly embellished with poetic rhyme and rhythm. A lovely creation.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 07 August 2019

Simply amazing, dear Ma’am Zaynab...10++++

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